作业帮求改英语作文李华写一封信告诉老师他近期的学习情况要求1：学习生活紧张而充实2.各科成绩都很好,3.你的梦想开头：Dear MIss MikeI‘m very glad to receive your e-mailThere are some information with me to youw
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求改英语作文李华写一封信告诉老师他近期的学习情况要求1：学习生活紧张而充实2.各科成绩都很好,3.你的梦想开头：Dear MIss MikeI‘m very glad to receive your e-mailThere are some information with me to youw
求改英语作文
李华写一封信告诉老师他近期的学习情况
要求1：学习生活紧张而充实
2.各科成绩都很好,
3.你的梦想
开头：
Dear MIss Mike
I‘m very glad to receive your e-mail
There are some information with me to you
when i became a high school student,I found that the life is different from past.Our study and life not only very nervous but aslo rich.That made me more like the new life
I often use a lot time to study,so my all subject is well expect math.Because I too lazy to not want do it,and I decided to learn it more and more
I perfer worker than becoming a enginer ,so I must spend any time with it and you will see me in the TV or news shortly after
结尾不打上来了= =,求老师纠正下
求改英语作文李华写一封信告诉老师他近期的学习情况要求1：学习生活紧张而充实2.各科成绩都很好,3.你的梦想开头：Dear MIss MikeI‘m very glad to receive your e-mailThere are some information with me to youw
Mrs.Mike Mike是男名
some information about me i want to tell
when 改成after 比较合适,when是那个时刻,可是生活的不同时在那之后发现的
nervous一般形容心情焦急,换成stressful比较好
a lot of 或lots of,不能只用a lot
subject要加s,它是可数名词
i‘m too lazy少了m,而且too...to已经代表太懒不想做的意思,后面不能加 not want do it,还有两个句子链接不对,要用but now I decided to learn it much harder
I perfer becoming a worker than enginer
spend much more time on it
总的来说,即使改正那么多错处,这篇文章也不是很好,感觉支离破碎,没有连接性,同学你要好好练练作文啊,多加一些精彩的句式和单词,句子也不要再一句一句的说了,这样得不了高分的.
望采纳.