.请英语大师帮我修改作文~着2篇我很多词语都是查字典的...读起来好象不太通顺..所以,请英语大师帮忙修改下~1.My dreamI have a beauty dream.I hope I can have a invisible wing.It can bring me and fly.Fly fly,I fly

.请英语大师帮我修改作文~着2篇我很多词语都是查字典的...读起来好象不太通顺..所以,请英语大师帮忙修改下~1.My dreamI have a beauty dream.I hope I can have a invisible wing.It can bring me and fly.Fly fly,I fly
.请英语大师帮我修改作文~
着2篇我很多词语都是查字典的...读起来好象不太通顺..所以,请英语大师帮忙修改下~
1.My dream
I have a beauty dream.I hope I can have a
invisible wing.It can bring me and fly.
Fly fly,I fly to beautiful field.I have
seen the withered rice.Hand light wave.Rice
well filled-out.
Fly fly,I fly to beautiful city.I have seen
but prosperous and bustingnoisy scene.Hand light
wave.Composedly afternoon hou wonderful.
Fly fly,I fly in children's dream.They want
beautiful clothes to toy play become reconciled.
Hand light wave.These all things show in my
right in front of us.
Fly fly,I fly to have the dream in the people's
world.I saw hard figure was insisting on.Hand
light wave.Their dream is realized.Laugh so
bright.
Fly fly,I fly to place of poorness.I saw
many people and have not the meal eat.Hand light
wave.Suddenly rice of a big basket appears on
the ground.
I know this dream very hard realize.But I
the wholehearted hopes that.I can complete the
desire of this happiness hard.Let us refuel
together!
Fly fly,I fly to.
2.Vsation
Expect expect,the summer vastion
finally came.I was so glad that I lost
senses soon.Following hoildays when I
introduce my happiess!
Begin a vacation I ask WangMeng
Jie to play to my family.Because she is
very near from my famil.So she as free
may all come to my house.I am very glad
that WangMengJie can drop in when you have
time in my family.Because she can help
with my study.Sometimes she can teach me
with my electronic keyboard.
I am about to go to join the summer
camp in school tomorrow.I look forward very
much.I took compltely full tow big bags.
I am really very glad!
This summer vacation is really very
interesting!And I still have a the travel
in August!This we want to go to LianYunGang
to make the hot spring.
I like the vacation best!
.请适量修改...
1.我的梦想
我希望...
手一挥...
变成了...
基本上.这样.
期待，期待...
假期来另..
...
就这样..
2.假期.

.请英语大师帮我修改作文~着2篇我很多词语都是查字典的...读起来好象不太通顺..所以,请英语大师帮忙修改下~1.My dreamI have a beauty dream.I hope I can have a invisible wing.It can bring me and fly.Fly fly,I fly
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