请高手批改（9） What Is Success 　　　　　　What Is Success 　　The views about success is diffrent from diffrent person.Many people think that entered a famous university is success.Others may think get a good job is success.To earn m

请高手批改（9） What Is Success 　　　　　　What Is Success 　　The views about success is diffrent from diffrent person.Many people think that entered a famous university is success.Others may think get a good job is success.To earn m
请高手批改（9） What Is Success
　　　　　　What Is Success
　　The views about success is diffrent from diffrent person.Many people think that entered a famous university is success.Others may think get a good job is success.To earn more money pehapse become a label of success for some venders and manages.Yet the successful flag of a doctor seems saving a pacient.
　　However my point of view on it is all above are considerable.Every man's remand is diffrent.So their objectives is diffrent too.Certainly,the stands of success is diffrent.Rencently I often watch the programm “Chinese Talent” on TV,if a player could step into the stage and get four “Yes” from judgers.It could be a great success for them.
　　In order to get success,we should do our best,take more execises,use our brain,pursuit effective work.Although it could not garentee your success,but without effort is sure failues.

请高手批改（9） What Is Success 　　　　　　What Is Success 　　The views about success is diffrent from diffrent person.Many people think that entered a famous university is success.Others may think get a good job is success.To earn m
第一段：
第一句 is different 改为are different
第二句,entering a famous .
第三句,other‘s改为the other
第四句 perhaps become+s
最后一句 seems doing用法出错.seem to do
第二段：
第一句 完全有问题 重写（用However后面逗号掉了!）另附：这句意思不通你可以分成两句写
第二句 remand改demands 后面自然接复数.
第三句还是复数问题
第四句 Certainly 后面逗号去了,或者换成without doubt 短语 毫无疑问,后面 stands注意复数
第五句 Recently 后面接完成时,I ’ve watched.还有judge才是评审不用加r 这一句分错了句你if 要重新写一句和后面的it could be 成一句
第三段
第一句pursuit 是名词改成persue 动词最好是逗号去掉写成and pursue,并列最后一个成分要用and .
第二句保证拼错了是guarantee,逗号后面那分句成分错了,可以改成but lacking effort is always leading to failures .（failures 拼错了）.
差不多了 还有什么问题欢迎追问

pehapse是 perhaps吧 应该没有那个单词

是让批改的吧？第一行第一句，主语不是Theviews吗，谓语应该是are 把is换为are 第一行句末entered改为entering第二行get改为getting 我就修改这一行半 剩下的还是接力形式完成吧